So after reading my friend Esme’s wonderful flash fiction that she published in 101 Words, I decided to give it a shot myself, as it seemed like an interesting challenge to try to create a story with only 101 words.
I am proud to say, they liked my story I was published too. I would like to believe that I am as excellent a quality of writer as my friend, but it may also be that they’ll publish almost anybody. I shall believe the former in order to keep my friend’s spirits up. 🙂
Without any further ado, follow this link for my story.
Congratulations, Swarn. You should be proud. 🙂
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Thank you Victoria! I am very pleased that my first attempt was well received by the publication!
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“I would like to believe that I am as excellent a quality of writer as my friend, but it may also be that they’ll publish almost anybody. ” – Talk about giving with one hand and taking away with the other! Hahahahaha. I can assure you not every applicant gets in — I am even more sure though that very few of those who do succeed are of as fine a quality as your offering Swarn.
Thank you so much for the link, kind words and big clouds!
– Esme of Cloud and 101 Words fame waving at Swarn happily
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I like to make people aware of all possibilities and let them decide! Thank you Esme for your kind words. I am still proud of myself as it was my first attempt, so if not everybody gets in, then I do have good reason to be proud!
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You should be very proud sir, paring the story down again and again is incredibly tricky and to manage that with a good tale within as well is pure skill.
– Esme nodding and pinning a gold star to Swarn’s winner’s tiara upon the Cloud
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Goodness you two! Congratulations galore! And very well done Swarn! (applause & the crowd goes wild!)
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Thank you Professor!
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Pretty clever, Swarn. 😉
Your composition prompted me to try and accomplish the same. Alas, I could not limit my creativity to 101 words no matter how hard I tried (maybe another time). However, the mere act of composing produced the results located here.
(This is Nan. Esprit is my alter ego.)
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That’s beautiful Nan! It is hard to pare down 101 words. They first told me they liked my story but wanted me to add a line into my story of by the car pulling away. So all of a sudden I’m trying to think how to add even more words and get rid of others. It’s a good mental exercise, but can also be frustrating. lol
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That was a great story, Swarn 🙂 the old guy’s a cheeky one lol
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Thank you PK for your kind words! It was a fun challenge. I plan on trying to submit another when I have some time!
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Glad to hear 🙂 I’m looking forward to another! I really do enjoy your style of writing- hoping to learn from you 🙂
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You are too kind, because reading how beautifully you express yourself I m not sure what I can teach you!
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very awesome…. but strange… I don’t see any chemtrails in the photos of sky and clouds… what is going wrong here?
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Thanks I think. Um…should there be chemtrails? I’m not one for conspiracy theories. lol
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